The lyrics of Saiyaan were originally written by Bulleh Shah
(late) , a Punjabi Sufi poet , humanist and philosopher, who talks about the
life, the miseries in which we live in, they are permanent, but there gets a
time in life when you liberate from them and falls into temporary love, which
has to end apparently and suffering starts again, because there's no escape
from it .
concept 1, rejected (some further changes recquired)
concept 2 approved
Story/concept 1
The story starts ,a girl is shown shes about to begin with
the sufi dance and on the other hand the girl and boy use to live nearby an
they use to cross each other everyday at narror alley (thier street). they use
to see each other too an use to smile too.
once boy helps the girl because the girl way on the way and a robber
robbed her purse and the boy run towards the robber and get her purse and then
he went to the girl to return her purse , so she offered a cup of coffee to
boy and there he express his love and
now they are in relationship.
So once they both are sitting together at the roof so the
boys says you wont leave me? so the girl gets emotional and furiouly leaves the
boy and run towards her room. The boy use to follow him as she cloeses the
door, she starts throwing everything from the room and she take of the scarf
then it is revealed shes suffering through cancer , shes crying near the door
and the boy is knocking the door but the girl still crying and remembering her
happy moment.Then the moments are shown as the both roaming around an teasing
each other. The boy gifts her a pendent, that she is still wearing at the
present moment.
the boy on the other hand moves alone and wanted to be
alone.As his missing him.
they both are shown in there own parelle.
Again the girl is crying and watching the pictures that the
all things around her that use to give her hope and life.
Another part of dance is shown , explianing the their story.
the next day girl is about to get ready as shes wearing
scarf and unfortunatly she feels unconsious.
the boy woke and rush towards girls rush as he sees , girls
laying on floor and blood is coming out from the mouth.
The boys picks her and rush towards street for
hospital, in hospital doctor tell him that girl is suffering through cancer and
its her last stage ,he realizes that this was the reason that girl was running
away from him. he cries and thinks that girl is unable to
understand what to do as she shes not ready to leave him because she loves him
, let the suffer pain alone.
The boy visits a shrine, he pray for the girl. he sees the
sky and remeber how the girl use to enjoy the every drop of the rain and
fashback towards those memories.
And then the dance is shown again ,
The boy sit near the girl in hospital room, holing her hands
as he apologies to her that he was ubable to understand you but he tells her
not not to leave me i still love you. the girl smiles and realising that boy
still loves me and has forgiven her for
lying.
The girl handed over the pendent to the boy and she takes
the last breathes as the monitor goes blank and the girl left him behind once
again and the boy lifts him hand to close her eyes as shes no more.
and the boys sees the pendent in his hand as she leaves the
symbol of love of pendent in his hand.
The end.
Story/concept 2 ( thefinal concept which i am going to use
in my music video )
The story starts with the dawn is shown and then sufi dance
has shown the boy and girl crosses each other and passes a smile , in the very
next scene , they are shown as lovers.the girl sitting with the boy in her lap
at the roof top. As the boy ask her “you won’t leave me?” The girl gets
emotional and furiously leaves the boy and runs towards her room.
The boy follows her as she closes the door. She starts
throwing the things away as she is frustrated and crying. The boy calls for her
from outside, bangs the door again and again.
The girl while tired of crying sits near the door and
remembers the past- her happy moments with the boy.
She comes out of the flashback realizing it’s the same pain
she has to deal with. She sees her image in the mirror, as she is wearing the
same necklace that was given to her by the boy- as they run along the streets
enjoying their togetherness, the boy and the girl flirts with one another
(teasing each other). The boy gifts her a pendent. That she is still wearing.
The boy on the other hand moves away from there wanting to
be alone. The girl and boy are shown in their own parallel spaces together. As
the boy is missing their love, her presence and on the other hand girl is
crying seeing their pictures, all the things around her that use to give her
hope and life.
The boy returns the next day only seeing the girl lying on
the floor unconscious. She has blood coming out of her nose. He picks her up
and walks down the street.
In the hospital the doctor hands over the girl’s reports,
which reveals the boy that girl had cancer. And he realizes that this was the
reason that the girl was running away from him. He cries as he was unable to
understand her reasons that she loved him so much that she was ready to leave
him, let alone suffer the pain.
The boy visits a shrine. He prays for the girl. He sees the
sky and remembers how the girl use to enjoy each season of the rain.
Boy sits near the girl in the hospital room, holding her
hands as he apologizes to her for not understanding her pain and suffering. He
tells her again not to leave him. The girl smiles realizing that the boy still
loves her and has forgiven her. The monitor goes blank as the girl closes her
eyes in peace. The boy lifts her head only to realize that the girl has left
him alone once again, leaving behind the symbol of love the pendent in his
hand.The end
* further changes can be made in the concept.
